Just Hang on There

giftarist on Sep 3, 2009

Tags: Life, listen, love, money, mood, people, relationship, Thoughts, true, virtue, waiting

Waiting is a virtue of true love, a treasure which money can’t buy.

Listening to you,
I heard music from within,
Your heart kept on singing
The lines I wanted to have
In my song written for you,
And humming the tune I did,
My heart and mind knew
It’s you my darling, just hang on there!

Daily I’m watching you,
Your personality refreshes me,
The smile that you wear
Washed away my sorrows,
The look in your eyes
Pierced my soul all night,
I just can’t stop thinking,
It’s you my love, just hang on there!

Yes, it is my greatest privilege
To love you my dearest,
There’s none other else can compete,
For the love I have had for you,
No rival throne can survive
Within this heart of mine,
For they cannot bear my love,
To you my dearest, just hang on there!

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Jenny Heart on Sep 3, 2009
Great free flowing emotions. Like it!
cutedrishti8 on Sep 3, 2009
Nice one to share…thanks…
Shamanz on Sep 3, 2009
wonderful, I love the emotions I got from this poem.

Good job.
Hugo La Rosa on Sep 3, 2009
Very encouraging!
Debra. on Sep 3, 2009
Such an enchantingly passionate piece!
Christine Ramsay on Sep 3, 2009
A very beautiful poem of love
Buma on Sep 3, 2009
Very beautiful poem.
Lady Sunshine on Sep 3, 2009
Lovely piece…
Collette Edwards on Sep 3, 2009
wow great read nice flow, and a poem of love, I wonder is this your first love? the one you will remember the rest of your life? keep them coming
Nikita K on Sep 3, 2009
You write some of my favourite poems, giftarist and I love the language you use to get your message and thoughts across. Brilliant work!
Daisy Peasblossom on Sep 3, 2009
Lucky lady the woman who is the recipient of this poem!
CA Johnson on Sep 3, 2009
What a beautiful and romantic poem! I really liked it!
Jane Jane on Sep 4, 2009
love it.. sweet and the topic is catchy..=) hang in there and make more of this..=)
Tanya Wallace on Sep 4, 2009
This poem gives a true sense of romance,the kind of poem that should be in a romance novel.I very much enjoy reading your work,however;your poems like this are so heartfelt and expressed so well you can feel the emotions in your words which bring them right to the heart.Excellent work!

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