I once read a book that spoke of the tragedy of the "B" student; intelligent enough to comprehend what brilliance might look like, yet forever denied it.


Understanding is just around the corner;
Correct addition is just a decimal away.
The pants are creased to perfection,
But a protruding pocket with each step does sway.

The bed is mostly made;
the corners are not neat
The socks are clean and nice;
But there’s something icky on the feet.

Working hard to make it perfect,
To help others turn out right
Somehow neat is not enough to spawn
That gasp of sheer delight.

So I might as well curl up quietly
And close my weary eyes in sleep
Hoping that perfection might yet be
In dreamland soft and deep.

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  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 26, 2010

    I love this poem, Daisy. It seems no matter how hard some people try they never quite achieve what the desire.

    Christine

  • diamondpoet on Feb 26, 2010

    Very beautiful, makes one feel at peace.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Feb 26, 2010

    It is a process for sure

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 26, 2010

    That definitely doesn\’t apply to you Daisy but this is a beautiful poem of acceptance and very calming (and lovely photo!)

  • chellsy on Feb 26, 2010

    good one

  • ken bultman on Feb 26, 2010

    That is so great…and so is the kitty.

  • ken bultman on Feb 26, 2010

    That is so good….and the kitty’s behaving , too.

  • Karen Gross on Feb 26, 2010

    Great poem! I always feel this way – that I just don’t quite measure up.

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 26, 2010

    Oh Daisy, I feel the same way, always working to get it right, and not quiet making it. I think you nailed this one.

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