Poem inspired by and dedicated to Camel Brulez to her "just once", about a forbidden brief love/lust affair between a married couple, in bygone days it was called adultery…

Just once is all it takes, just once its a mistake,

just once you dare, just once its an affair…

Just once a moment of pleasure, just once all milk and honey,

just once you’ve found a treasure, just once you’ll regret for ever…

Just once you’ll seek, just once your weak,

just once is too many, just once your happy…

Just once you’ve looked, just once your hooked,

just once couldn’t stop, just once forgot the good book…

Just once your burnt, just once its gone,

just once its wrong, just once you’ve learnt…

Just once the burden, just once the hurting,

just once the pain, just once you’ll do it again…

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  • Frances Lawrence on Jan 12, 2010

    Very true, just once is too much, it will not stop at once and it will bring terrible pain.

  • Stan Wilson on Jan 12, 2010

    Thank you Frances for your valid comments here….once is too much,wont stop at once, yes brings terrible pain and heartache,to all involved…very sad but true..and just for a brief moment of physical pleasure……hummm seems like we come from the same school….

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 12, 2010

    Yes it only takes that moment of weakness to leave consequences behind. A good piece.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 12, 2010

    Very good poem!

  • albert1jemi on Jan 12, 2010

    ha ha thats was really good one

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 12, 2010

    Really nice…

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 12, 2010

    The forbidden love affair. You described it with such love and guilt.

  • AlmaG on Jan 13, 2010

    Wonderful poem :)

  • thuanynguyen on Jan 14, 2010

    This is an amazing piece! i love it. keep it up!

  • V rank on Jan 14, 2010

    I thought this was a song… hehehe… I like it…

  • devsir on Jan 15, 2010

    One of the best.

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  • Peter Cimino on Jan 15, 2010

    Very sweet. Well done

  • standingproud on Jan 16, 2010

    there are always consequences to our actions.
    Be careful ,think twice before acting,as one slip can be so devastating

  • standingproud on Jan 16, 2010

    There is always consequence’s to our actions
    there for be careful in all we do
    as the devastation of that one moment of fleshly desire can and will effect others far to painfully, just for that one moment, it is just not worth the risk.

  • Joan on Jan 16, 2010

    So very true!!! It could be guilt, or it could be the lament of the suffering party…either way, it is heartbreaking, and a very good poem!!!!!!

  • Stan Wilson on Jan 16, 2010

    Your words are all so true Joan,thank you and to all the other thoughtful comments left here too….very much appreciated….

  • Val Mills on Jan 17, 2010

    Sounds like white chocolate.

  • Stan Wilson on Jan 17, 2010

    hummm white chocolate. no comprendo???

  • Tina Cassello on Jan 23, 2010

    Very true. One taste of sin will turn into a habit very easily, but goo habits are hard to form.

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