Just Once More Time My Love

LOVELYHONEY on Sep 21, 2009

A simple poem of love to overcome loneliness and isolation.

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A could be lover

The night is young

My love is far away

Where in this world does he stay?

From me he always stays

Far away

But remembers me

All and very day

My love is so cute

I miss him most

He doesn’t damn care

For me

Still my lover is friendly

Than most

I only wanted him to a friend be.

Where is my love

Under which sheet,

The cold,

The snow,

Or the one where it must be raining,

Where ever he is

It’s okay by me

He is lover under training

I am not his lover

Nor am I in line

I am only trying to rhyme

Wherever my love goes

Let him go

He is only befriending me

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Comments (3)

papaleng on Sep 21, 2009
so sweet and the feeling of longing is seen in every line.
Joie Schmidt on Sep 21, 2009
Strong work*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Shamanz on Sep 22, 2009
I agree with Liane and Papaleng. A strong poem that carries that feeling of being alone and isolated. Relationships are one of those things that can cause a person on a mental breakdown due to this powerful emotion in between.

Write on!

Hi there!