Just one night.

for tonight let me spend the night here
for tonight I do not want to go home
wine makes me want to snap complacent
I want to sleep with
for tonight I want to own you
for tonight just let me spend the night with you just
to forget who I am tonight
for tonight I want to spend my time with you only
let me make love to you just for tonight before we decide to split up
let just this evening I will appreciate my desire sosokmu
let just tonight I want satisfied mengecupmu
just for tonight I’m into magic pengaruhmu
just for tonight you and me as lovers
song of longing will make you and me used to
this is the last time I remember the day when you and I together and then tomorrow we are not united anyone else

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  • cmanjuc on Oct 18, 2010

    Good one

  • jimbob1 on Oct 18, 2010

    Miss M…I voted that I did like this one because it is showing some pretty good improvement in your writing. There are a couple of incomplete thoughts but overall this is a pretty good bit of prose However, I find the use of foreign words without an English interpretation somewhat distracting…Thank you for sharing this memorable night…

  • Wordcrafter on Oct 19, 2010

    I like the way you write for you have conveyed your heart. Keep writing

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