This was written to express those things we feel are just beyond our reach.

It was just outer reach

My arms are just not long enough

I reached with all my might

Just outer reach not outer sight

 

I could almost touch it

I lean some to get closer

It smell like strawberry I could almost bite

I could not reach it this just is not right

 

Image by US Army Africa via Flickr

 

Just outer reach

But not outer mind

I know how to reach it

Only my ability I must find

 

My goal is before me

The challenge is clear as the sky

The plan is to reach it

Still it just outer mine’s eye

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  • Snooky on Mar 4, 2010

    Outer reasch instead of out of reach sounds like an astronaunt lost in space.
    extrremely different style

  • sahista1 on Mar 5, 2010

    Excellent

  • Hazel Crowther on Mar 5, 2010

    I found this quite moving and inspiring.

  • albert1jemi on Mar 8, 2010

    good one

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