Just Say When

Darla Cooke on Apr 3, 2010

A couplet love poem.

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Just say when and I’ll be there,

for I would follow you anywhere.

We’ll stroll together along the beach,

while in the sky seagulls screech.

With the stars twinkling so bright,

I’ll kiss you beneath the moonlight.

We’ll walk the shore hand-in-hand,

strolling barefoot through the sand.

Before the night changes into day,

in the vast ocean we’ll both play.

Your body pressed to mine intimately,

tonight we’ll set our passion free.

We’ll make love in the ocean waves,

your touch is what my body craves.

My true feelings I’ll finally confess,

your heart and soul I will possess.

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Milton H Peebles III on Apr 3, 2010
Very good flow with this one – Like it very muches
Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
Starpisces on Apr 3, 2010
very romantic poem, and the pic you selected is very nice too.
deep blue on Apr 3, 2010
So passionately expressed with matching sunset in the beach. Excellent lines.
giftarist on Apr 3, 2010
Fascinating piece.
Precious Illusions on Apr 3, 2010
love the picture…love your words…and can feel the emotions you expressed…:)
Geomorphosis on Apr 3, 2010
Very romantic piece. Nice pic to go along too.
Goodselfme on Apr 3, 2010
Beautifully penned.
Temjen Imchen on Apr 4, 2010
Passionately beautiful
RS Wing on Apr 4, 2010
These are really beautiful verses Darla. Like a song that provokes emotions, you do it with the written word. Fabulous writing and uplifting energy. Great work!
LOVELYHONEY on Apr 4, 2010
i remember reading and commenting this has someone erasedmy comments how is it??
Jay Knights on Apr 4, 2010
This is lovely. A romantic walk on the beach, followed by making love in the warm ocean……mmmmm…..
STEVE666 on Apr 5, 2010
Sounds great, Darla!
T. S. Lewis on Apr 5, 2010
I like it when your poems describe ocean scenes.
Yvonne K on May 11, 2010
wow

Hi there!