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Just This Moment

fragile18 on Sep 10, 2010
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Just wondering. :)

Just this moment, 

I feel like doing crazy things, 

I wanna soar high

and wander around the earth with my bare feet.

I want to count every rain drops,

and name all the stars I see.

and just this moment, 

I wonder who will be doing those things with me. :)

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  • The Soul Explorer on Sep 10, 2010

    Yeah, that’s crazy things! LOL

  • earthlyjewels on Sep 10, 2010

    I’ll name the stars with you :-) Nice post…thanks for sharing!

  • fragile18 on Sep 10, 2010

    thanks :)

  • Shamyl on Sep 10, 2010

    cute cute cute

  • giftarist on Sep 10, 2010

    Count me in. :)

  • Penggaroo on Sep 11, 2010

    I will!

  • ishinimrod on Sep 11, 2010

    This is nice…

  • LoveDoctor on Sep 12, 2010

    Very beautiful poem

  • PSingh1990 on Sep 12, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • Joseph Scott on Sep 16, 2010

    Beautifully written! :)

  • josephmedillo on Oct 1, 2010

    smiley

  • The Soul Explorer on Oct 16, 2010

    nice!

  • drelayaraja on Oct 16, 2010

    Great poem..

  • Mr Ghaz on Oct 17, 2010

    Good one! Nice and lovely poem. Loved this :)

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Oct 17, 2010

    I am so there……….I could fly around the universe, bare footed, with the wind blowing in my hair. Looking and marvelling at everything I see.
    Great poem

  • cmanjuc on Oct 18, 2010

    sweet

  • dino renaldo on Oct 25, 2010

    good ones

  • culprit pontiff on Oct 31, 2010

    nice one…I’ll read about stars so I can share it to you..

  • SimplyShash on Nov 11, 2010

    Interesting lines. Good one.

  • yes me on Dec 5, 2010

    A great share this one cheers Mishee

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Dec 6, 2010

    …how i wish all our fantasies can be achieved

  • lyan08 on Dec 12, 2010

    nice poetry.

  • Sexyhood03 on Dec 19, 2010

    neat poem

  • Inna Tysoe on Dec 19, 2010

    Good one.

  • lpshady on Dec 19, 2010

    poetic type of person?

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 20, 2010

    It’s a wonderful feeling, Don’t ever lose it.

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 20, 2010

    beautiful poem

  • lonelyplanet on Dec 21, 2010

    Wow…fantastic write here.

  • Tulan on Dec 22, 2010

    Oh, sweet.

  • UncleSammy on Dec 27, 2010

    nice share

  • Ranveer Singh Battu on Dec 29, 2010

    i have had the very same feeling many times…. its nice to know that even u have felt it……

  • T. S. GARP on Jan 21, 2011

    Beautifully expressed.Very nice and I’m sure everyone would want to join you on that great adventure! These are timeless feeling that should never be lost.

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