I feel for you pain, and it must be terrible, but I regret to say here that this poem sounds more like a declaration in prose than any kind of poetry fixed or free style for that matter. This seems to be written in free style which is easy and hard to do at the same time. when you write in free style for you have enough freedom to experiment you have to try to go all the way with the poetic diction, not to leave nothing to chance that it might sound like prose.

I wish you better in your life.

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hi im kayla and im fifteen.. i also have fibromialia and i know how hard it is to deal with:( reading your poem was like reading my everyday thoughts and feelings.. and i just wanted to ask you how old are you and how long have you been dealing with fybromyalia? and what are your favorite things that help you cope? just curious.. because im running out of things to help:/

I’m 29 and I was just diagnosed 2 months ago, but I’ve probably had it most of my life. I’m still trying to figure out the things that help. Sometimes it doesn’t feel like anything does. I try to laugh as much as possible. Staying positive and happy despite the pain and everything else is so important. I hold on to my faith and I hold on to hope and I somehow manage to make it through the day. Keep your head up and don’t let anyone ever get away with calling you lazy or crazy!