Just Wondering

Collette Edwards on Sep 3, 2009

Tags: Bed, choice, dream, estranged, face, gleam, haunt, image, poem, Poetry, Swirls, Think, urge, voice, wonde

Poem.

Where are you? It’s been so long.
Your image swirls around in my head.
I wonder do you ever think of me?
While you lay quietly on your bed.
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Does the sound of my voice haunt you?
Do thoughts of me still make you gleam?
Does others looks remind you of me?
Does my face appear in your dreams?
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Do you get the urge to call me?
Just to hear the sound of my voice.
Why did you leave without a word?
Was it really your only choice?
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If we had it to do all over again,
There is one thing I would change.
I’d love you with all i have in me,
So it would be harder for you to become estranged.

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Lady Sunshine on Sep 3, 2009
Aw Collette…past loves do tend to haunt.
Jane Jane on Sep 3, 2009
feelings are overwhelming..=)
Birgit Niveaux on Sep 3, 2009
i may be young but i clearly understand this feeling. the only difference i have another chance to make things right.
Emma Green on Sep 3, 2009
I can relate to this too! Great write.
alc on Sep 3, 2009
I always hate funning into those whom I used to have feeling for, since there will always be something there! Thanks for the share!
Mr Ghaz on Sep 3, 2009
Great post!..this really beautiful and lovely poem as always..I Loved it. Keep it up.
Collette Edwards on Sep 3, 2009
Thanks For the wondrful comments I so enjoy hearing comments. And PinkButterfly you are so lucky to get that secondchance, that is rare chance, make the best of it:)
cutedrishti8 on Sep 3, 2009
Nice one to be shared…Nice selection…
ducroisjosef on Sep 3, 2009
You never forget the one that got away, and always wonder if they can’t forget you either. We can all relate to this, very good poem.
ken bultman on Sep 4, 2009
Kind of an old flame story. I can relate.
giftarist on Sep 4, 2009
Great read!
Bo Russo on Sep 4, 2009
One of the worst gifts we have is to wonder what might have been.

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