The Day the skies wept blood…

The Day the skies wept blood
The tenth dawn of Islam’s new year,
Seventy-two of the bravest who had nothing to fear,
Came out to battle for our pride,
Knowing that the journey to Heaven would be their very next ride.
On the blistering sands, under the scorching sun,
Stood the mighty Hussein, a soldier second to none,
With the fragrance of musk, it had to be said,
The skies of Karbala were already turning red.
Every ally wanted the honor of being first,
To drink the honey of paradise and quench their thirst,
As each one’s body fell on the sand and mud,
It was Ashura, the day the skies wept blood.
A marriage in the tent during this grieving hour,
Abdullah knew that the time was not far,
In the attire of a groom, He set out to fight,
Realizing the loss, Sakina cried throughout that Night
Abbas did not even drink a sip from the river,
But was hit by arrows from the trees’ rear,
Hussein’s final support ascended to the heavens,
It was now only Hussein and those inhumane devils.
But, Ali Akbar, the very valiant youngster the world,
has seen was hit in the heart during the pinnacle of His teens,
The face of the Prophet (SA) with blood was smeared,
Hussein’s tears completely drenched His beard.
Asgar, the courageous six month old prince,
Fought for Islam’s pride without hesitance,
Until that heartless satan let his arrow fly,
Young Ali Asgar’s blood was taken by the sky.
Hussein ibn Ali, the Noble Son, and The Greatest Martyr,
Stood ready to fight with absolutely no fear,
Until a teary eyed Jibrael descended from the Heavens,
Allah’s wish is Your sacrifice Oh Highborn Eminence.
Hussein happily welcomed Allah’s Missive,
Bowed down to Sajdah for the future billions,
Zainab, cried aloud at the sight of Her mind’s eye,
Upon witnessing Her imperial brother peacefully die.
Princess Sakina with Her cheeks so blue,
From all the slapping that mad man put Her through,
Those hellion’s horses were allowed to run,
And on the Holy Bodies, further damage was done.
Tears roll down my cheeks as I pen these verses,
Remembering the pain of Hussein and His masses,
But if it wasn’t for Hussein we wouldn’t be where we are,
we wouldn’t be Mumineens.

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Comments (18)
  • maranatha on Feb 16, 2009

    Moving piece! Well done.

  • cardy on Feb 16, 2009

    Loved it powerful poem, nice work.

  • Westbrook on Feb 16, 2009

    I am not sure what is all about but I can see that you put your feelings into writing it.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Feb 16, 2009

    Its related to Shiite Islams defining moment. Nice poetic flow.

  • godspooet on Feb 16, 2009

    nice write keep up the good work

  • QuinMonty86 on Feb 16, 2009

    It was very moving. I’m not familiar with your history, but I could tell it was a very important time for you.

  • Darla Smith on Feb 16, 2009

    Nice poem! I like it.

  • Holly J. Harrington on Feb 16, 2009

    Poetry in story form love it.

  • HatedNation on Feb 16, 2009

    Karbala, wow been there…bet it was much nicer back then…

  • Lee Altman on Feb 16, 2009

    poetry at it’s best

  • S Air on Feb 16, 2009

    Beautifully told.

  • Yovita Siswati on Feb 17, 2009

    Thanks for sharing part of your history to us.

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 17, 2009

    you really can write great poem, and all your submitted photos are fantastic

  • Dewan Golam Shafi Choudhury on Feb 17, 2009

    wow this is a powerful poem! Excellant write!

  • miraj on Feb 17, 2009

    Hi,

    this is such a riveting story of our land,portraying a history of the valiant men who bravely gave their lives for the price of glory.masterfully told.

    my deepest respect and gratitude,MA Bhanpurwala
    LOVE IS ALL

    Walk in beauty change the world.

  • trishia on Feb 25, 2009

    Thanks for sharing!

  • denus on Mar 1, 2009

    great work, thanks!

  • 32 BarClay on Mar 4, 2009

    Oh MA ! This is wonderufl, you are a very talented poet! Thank you for sharing.

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