Keep Sailing

wonder on Oct 30, 2009

Tags: generate, mermaid, sailing, sorry, static, worry, wronged

The waterfront will be closed in winter.

On my dining table there was no bread

Only the picture lay there instead.

But it wasn’t fair

That wasn’t its rightful place

Thus after sometime there was no trace

Someone made off with it.

I know the person well

But I didn’t point out

A trivial, there are greater things to worry about.

After all the effort I was sorry

However it has generated some poetry.

To take the cues from this

Whenever I am wronged,

I remember the day will pass

Nothing is static and staid

But is forever sailing,

It is sailing like a mermaid.

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Eunice Tan on Oct 30, 2009
Very impressive and meaningful
wonder on Oct 30, 2009
Hi friends,
I shall miss you for sometime
Thanks.
ken bultman on Oct 30, 2009
Great poetry although I’m sorry it had to be inspired by a loss. I love how your artwork always depicts movement. The mermaids are delightful.
K.Reshma on Oct 30, 2009
Very meaningful poem
chitragopi on Oct 30, 2009
Good philosophical poem. Lively painting.
Jane Jane on Oct 30, 2009
lovely piece of poem and painting.
Jenny Heart on Oct 30, 2009
Love the emotion here! Greaat one!
Vikram Chhabra on Oct 30, 2009
Great work. A journey that starts from a piece of bread to a divine swimming mermaid. Excellent!
Starpisces on Oct 30, 2009
Nice poem and painting again, liked it, keep it coming, Wonder.. but I am a bit confused when you mentioned “Hi friends,I shall miss you for sometime”… what is it? I think I did not have enough sleep so the mind not clear did not get your meaning…??
cutedrishti8 on Oct 30, 2009
Great post..
Frances Lawrence on Oct 30, 2009
A nice outlook on life
T. S. GARP on Oct 30, 2009
Nice poem, great words! Really like this one Wonder.
Aiyanna on Oct 30, 2009
Really nice write, love it
sandie on Oct 30, 2009
if you are leaving dont be too long away, we love your excellent poems we shall miss, sandie x.
Mr Ghaz on Oct 31, 2009
well-presented and lovely poem..nice words too. I loved it!
thresiapaulose on Oct 31, 2009
Dear Wonder
I really wonder at your works. I have added you as my friend. How do you like my articles?
Congrats
Teves on Nov 5, 2009
Excellent…
Sunitha Stalin on Nov 9, 2009
nice work…….
Ruby Hawk on Nov 10, 2009
This is excellent work.
dgraphicrookie on Dec 1, 2009
Excellent! Inspiring! Awesome!
SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 30, 2010
Dwelling too much on the past only hampers our ability to succeed in the future.

Keep Sailing

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