Keep Your Focus!

quiet voice on Nov 23, 2011

Tags: Belief, destination, happen, over, Path, Stay, strong

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Keeping your eye on the goal, is key.

If one is to succeed,

They must be able,

To stay on the path,

To their destination.

Visualization can be the ticket,

To obtaining one’s desires.

Approach, with a positive attitude,

Even if one has to start over.

Keep a strong belief,

That it will happen,

In juat a little while,

Your goal will be real.

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Comments (5)

zeo on Nov 23, 2011
Very interesting piece. Well written for the most part. Please, continue writing and sharing your thoughts with us.
Mr.Soloxen on Nov 23, 2011
Great job,well written
Victoria Jenkins on Nov 23, 2011
I like this! You use waaayy too many comma’s, though. Read this aloud–only insert a comma where you’d pause for breath. You don’t need one at the end of every line. For instanc,e that whole first sentence doesn’t need any comma’s at all.
justaka on Nov 23, 2011
This is so true. I really like it.
Razorwind on Jan 12, 2012
It takes a focused mind to be a poet. And a lot of dedication and patiance.

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