A poem.

Her bones kicked her lies out,
There was never anything to lie about.
She never lied to you
about the things you never knew.

Her  mouth kicked her words out,
There was never anything to speak about.
She already talked to you
about the things that made her true.

Her mind kicked her unaware out,
There was never anything to be unaware about.
She was never unaware of you.

Her eyes kicked the blind out,
There was never anything to be blind about.
She never hid from you.

Her heart kicked her dreams out,
There was never anything to dream about.
She never kept her dreams from you,
you knew.

Her spirit kicked her asleep out
There was never anything to be asleep about.
She was never asleep with you.
The two of you awake now.

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 7, 2009

    unique poem

  • revivor on Nov 8, 2009

    read it once, and again, and bits of it again
    still not sure if I quite get it
    but that’s the point – it made me think
    and anything that does that
    is worth reading again
    and again

    revivor

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 8, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Nov 8, 2009

    wow beautiful as always nisa!!!!!!
    I love it, you’re so intense

  • VenusWorshipper on Nov 22, 2009

    I enjoy this poem.. it resonates.. nice work!

  • Stan Wilson on Jan 4, 2010

    just like Revivor says anything that gets you thinking and re-reading has to be good for you/us/me/them…yeah its a beauty alright…awesome

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