About how I miss being little in a big tub.

The adventure begins
I ride the dragon high above
Flying through the clouds
Twirling we dive from above

Straight down so fast
Wind whips my hair
Then crash with so much splash
The water flies with flair

Uh Oh Stomp Stomp Stomp
Door open showing Mom in Distress
She looks right at me
“How Did You Make This Mess!?”

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  • Poetic Angel on Jan 13, 2009

    lol. Oh how we wish we could go back to those days! This was a joy to read

  • Darla Smith on Jan 13, 2009

    I really like this one!

  • CutestPrincess on Jan 13, 2009

    hehe, cute poem! wish i could bring back the time!

  • lisa on Jan 13, 2009

    i’m giggling picturing the mom looking at the horrifying mess.

  • monica55 on Jan 13, 2009

    Very cute, shows that a mom\’s job is never done.
    Monica

  • Janet on Jan 19, 2009

    Poor Mom

  • milli on Feb 4, 2009

    OH yes, I have seen such a mess!!!!!

  • ART on Feb 27, 2009

    Oh the fun of making such a mess. My wife would KILL me if I did that now.

  • Palestrya on Apr 2, 2011

    Nice, cute poem. Makes me think of my grandma’s big tub. One time my cousins, sisters, and I were all in the tub together. My aunt just had to have a picture of that! LOL Thanks for the share, I had forgotten about that.

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