When my Mom died I looked at my Dad, this is what he said that day, without a single word.

We
now
Me
Hold the door, watch what you say
She is your better half
that now has gone away
What happens without her
will anything matter
or will I just cry
No more hopes, dreams
or reasons to be alive
Me
no longer
us
there is nothing
that could ever hurt worse

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  • Marlon Marshall on Sep 27, 2007

    Nice stuff. I wrote a poem that I think you may enjoy it’s called you’ve been weighed measured and bounded.

  • lamemansterms on Oct 1, 2007

    thanks Marlon, I appreciate you taking the time to check it out–I will get to yours real soon, thanks again!
    Lt

  • lamemansterms on Dec 28, 2007

    dude you are a genius!!!!!!

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