An erotic love poem.

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You have a zestful craving for sex,

you enthusiasm is out of control.

Your carnal knowledge is outstanding,

such amazing ardor you do possess.

Let’s surrender to the kinky passions,

the ones you express in your poetry.

Place your lush lips upon my flesh,

I want to be kissed into pure rapture.

Your lustful longings are so contagious,

let’s engage in our wildest fantasy.

Please make our dream come true.

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  • ken bultman on Nov 30, 2009

    A maiden’s prayer…or in somecases, an old maid’s plea.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 30, 2009

    A very passionate piece. So well written.

    Christine

  • diamondpoet on Nov 30, 2009

    Now that the way I like my morning nice and steamy. Thanks for sharing.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 30, 2009

    nice one..

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 30, 2009

    passion helps keep us going.

  • STEVE666 on Nov 30, 2009

    This needs a second verse, detailing the fantasys! lol

  • Goodselfme on Nov 30, 2009

    Nicely penned prose.

  • cardy on Nov 30, 2009

    You are so good at these loved it a hot write!!

  • Themax on Nov 30, 2009

    hi Darla very passionate! nice write,thank you :)

  • Milton H Peebles III on Nov 30, 2009

    Wonderful Dream
    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

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  • Linda Lori on Nov 30, 2009

    Hot, hot, hot.. and love the picture too!!! =)

  • AlmaG on Nov 30, 2009

    Passionate poem… great one thanks :)

  • Valerie Curtiss on Nov 30, 2009

    Very Nice

  • Steven West on Dec 1, 2009

    Very passionate feelings expressed.

  • Mr Ghaz on Dec 1, 2009

    wonderful!..that was nice one..well-presented and unique indeed. Thanks for sharing..cheers 8) 8)

  • abhishek40914 on Dec 1, 2009

    very passionate

  • giftarist on Dec 1, 2009

    Great piece again, great work!

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 2, 2009

    Ohh Darla, this is HOT stuff. Nice work!! Thanks for sharing

  • LOVELY HONEY on Dec 2, 2009

    The candle has burnt
    Our the poetry of love
    still resounds
    Passion in me still rebounds

    What of sex you say
    Its all lust and passion
    All the way

    Sex is but a momentary pleasure
    Measure for measure
    Its not sex we treasure
    But love and kindness
    Is all we can measure?

    So stay on line
    read poetry of mine
    when the time does come divine
    Your words shall remain
    As if they\’re mine.

    Poetry is an art of expression of love
    It keeps us away from depression
    Read poetry and leave a message for all
    Love is pure love,
    ‘Tis truth that remains after all

  • Yvonne K on Dec 3, 2009

    wow

  • writeme on Dec 3, 2009

    Kool very nice

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