Kisses me till I weep…

I.
Come now, boy!
Kiss me now…
Kiss me quick…

II.
Kiss me soft…
Kiss me sweet…

III.
Kiss me here…
Kiss me slow…
Kiss me everywhere your mouth goes!

IV.
Kiss me hard…
Kiss me deep…
Kiss me down there as I clutch the sheets!

V.
Oh!
Just kiss me…
Kiss me till I weep!

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  • Teves on Jan 9, 2010

    Yes I will kiss you….Mwah! like that?

  • Atanacio on Jan 9, 2010

    wow this was clever and sweet :)

  • Sharif Ishnin on Jan 9, 2010

    That’s a whole lot of kisses going around.lol.

  • sandie on Jan 9, 2010

    kisses to you and your poem, good

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 9, 2010

    A very kissy piece. I liked it. Well done.

    Christine

  • Guy Hogan on Jan 9, 2010

    This reminds me of a line in a song: I want to kiss you all over ’til the night rushes in.

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 9, 2010

    Oh yes in deed Lady Sunshine, my lips are puckered so come and get some. I really enjoyed this poem with its sensual play of words placed in perfectly. You are one amazing writer and one I admire…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • bailieman on Jan 9, 2010

    Who is the lucky fella, I wonder?

  • Starpisces on Jan 9, 2010

    here come my kisses…
    muak… muak.. muak…
    haha..

  • Shirley Shuler on Jan 9, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, that’s a lot of sweet kisses to go around, loved it!

  • ken bultman on Jan 10, 2010

    The folks at Hersheys must be working overtime.

  • standingproud on Jan 10, 2010

    Kiss me too
    I love kisses in any form…

  • deep blue on Jan 11, 2010

    Now I know what’s a double dutch, maybe it’s a clutch. Well the “c” and “d” keys were just behind each other. And when you clutch something, it maybe an attempt to grasp something out of excitement or, whatever. As for cars, you need to step on the clutch to shift the gears. Hmmnnn, maybe I just lack some sleep.

  • 1niknik2008 on Jan 11, 2010

    Great poem!

  • Tmrobotix on Jan 20, 2010

    I don’t know what clutch is by I enjoyed reading the rest of it haha :D
    Cool poem!

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