A lingering desire but a bad foul mouth persists.


The whole night passes.

But you silently,

Turn your back,

I know because,

Your mouth,

Does smell of smack.

You turn your side,

Then I on the other ride.

We constantly look the other way,

Oh my loved one,

Return my kiss one day,

Or should I say some day,

Better still,

Just today.

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  • revivor on Jun 8, 2009

    love the pics!! and the poem – yes, a sad but true tale!! good choice of subject

  • Betty Carew on Jun 8, 2009

    Great poem Lovely

  • HAPPYGEORGE on Jun 8, 2009

    Poem that orginate from the intimacy deep from heart and soul…beautiful and lovely..

  • George W Whitehead on Jun 8, 2009

    Sounds like a true story, LH.

  • irishpen on Jun 9, 2009

    Love this!!

    ~peace~

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