A sweet interpretation about death.

Life is melting like a fragile candle
Everyday we confront many struggle
In the air we built a pseudo-castle
While blowing the broken bugle.

Yet death is a sweet invitation
Why should you cry for a dead person?
Don’t utter any bad expostulation
This is a part of our destination.

The kiss of death is saccharin
Like a sweet sound of the violin
Don’t grieve for their remains
They’re only sleeping in coffin.

There’s no requiem or elegy
The song of death must be euphony
I wanna hear the ethereal melody
To symbolize the life with glory.

The hue of death is white not black
Like the painting of niche which made of rock
Even the skeleton of the dead has dislock
Their undying memory will never crack.

Kiss me now and take my breath away
Throw the ashes of my body in the bay
Then paint the clouds with silver gray
Consecrate me the smell of new-moon-hay!

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  • Vintage_Cynic on May 22, 2008

    I really liked your poem, feel free to check out mine sometime. I’ll continue reading yours and I’m sure ill enjoy the others just as much.

  • acecampillo on May 22, 2008

    Nice poem. Good Job and God Bless.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 23, 2008

    this is a great poem bro,
    i’ll su this when i get home,out of town ako e

  • tracy sardelli on May 23, 2008

    nice poem, thank you for sharing,

  • salvatore on May 23, 2008

    great poem, thanks for sharing,

  • Alexa Gates on May 23, 2008

    great poem :)

  • Stephen Nico on May 30, 2008

    Nice article!!!!

  • ebazaar on Jun 15, 2008

    I’ve just started going bout some poetry writings on triond, stumble upon this coz i find the title interesting. and yes, so does the content. Keep up the work.

  • Rumi on Oct 9, 2008

    Thank you for sharing it with us

  • goodselfme on Dec 1, 2008

    Well penned, friend.

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