Oh what fun !!!


It was a beautiful day
with many a bewitching sound.
Birds flying; birds singing
nature’s beauty we found.
We were carrying
two beautiful kites.
Mine an awesome monkey
Ellie’s a tiger so bright !!
We walked all the way
to the fields above.
Ellie so bubbly
her laughter I love.
We held the strings as we
ran in full flow;
The kites took flight
their beauty on show.
The weaving and bobbing
of her amazing tiger;
Ellie’s joy so evident
The world ever brighter ?
Her tiger looked awesome
when seen from below;
She chanted and giiggled
“Go tiger Go !!!”


My monkey started to lose
some of it’s grace.
Lookig very slanted
was his poor wrinkled face.
It crashed it’s descent
zooming it’s way !!!
Till in many many pieces
my poor kite lay !!
Ellie laughed and laughed
till she couldn’t anymore.
I jouned in her lauhghter
till my sides were so sore !!
Ellie’s tiger still in one piece
and really seems to grin.
Because my poor monkey
had to go in the bin !!
Oh what fun we had
yesterday afternoon.
And will we do it again?
oh yes very soon !!

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