Oh what fun !!!






It was a beautiful day

with many a bewitching sound.

Birds flying; birds singing

nature’s beauty we found.

We were carrying

two beautiful kites.

Mine an awesome monkey

Ellie’s a tiger so bright !!

We walked all the way

to the fields above.

Ellie so bubbly

her laughter I love.

We held the strings as we

ran in full flow;

The kites took flight

their beauty on show.

The weaving and bobbing

of her amazing tiger;

Ellie’s joy so evident

The world ever brighter ?

Her tiger looked awesome

when seen from below;

She chanted and giiggled

“Go tiger Go !!!”




My monkey started to lose

some of it’s grace.

Lookig very slanted

was his poor wrinkled face.

It crashed it’s descent

zooming it’s way !!!

Till in many many pieces

my poor kite lay !!

Ellie laughed and laughed

till she couldn’t anymore.

I jouned in her lauhghter

till my sides were so sore !!

Ellie’s tiger still in one piece

and really seems to grin.

Because my poor monkey

had to go in the bin !!

Oh what fun we had

yesterday afternoon.

And will we do it again?

oh yes very soon !!




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  • Molly Girl 822 on May 12, 2012

    This brought back wonderful memories. Thank you!

  • Joie Schmidt on May 14, 2012

    Very cute.



    -Joie Schmidt.

  • Eiddwen on May 14, 2012

    Thank you so much for the comments.
    Enjoy your days.

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