Traditional 5/7/5 haiku.

Birthing time for ewe

A new lamb enters the world

Hot and slippery

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  • jaysonv on Dec 29, 2009

    wow great post..nice pics..

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 29, 2009

    So cute, well written.

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 29, 2009

    You evoke the images of the lambing sheds in those few words. I would love to read longer poems written by you.

  • albert1jemi on Dec 29, 2009

    well written

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 29, 2009

    You portray a vivid image of the scene with your words.

    Christine

  • Pаtsy Collins on Dec 29, 2009

    You’re spot on – that’s exactly what newborn lambs are like.

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