Lament

Lady Sunshine on Oct 27, 2009

Tags: blood, Crimson, daydreams, lament, nightmares, obsession, regrets

Regrets flows a crimson red.

Tears of blood
On my tongue
Taste of crimson
Spilling from a gun
Flowing freely
Like a river
Down a street
Upon a shiver
Giving me chills
Up my spine
As whispers float
Into my mind
Turning nightmares
From real-life fiction
Into daydreams
Of past addictions
Taking over
A soul possession
From lost regrets
My one obsession
Never forgetting
Forever broken
Wanting forgiveness
For lives unspoken

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Jenny Heart on Oct 27, 2009
Very thought provoking!
raman13 on Oct 27, 2009
excellent
Teves on Oct 27, 2009
Nice written…
ken bultman on Oct 27, 2009
Good poetry…a bit dark.
Papa Sparks on Oct 27, 2009
I like the dark underpinnings and vivid imagery. Very provocative my friend.
Sourav on Oct 27, 2009
Nice and free flowing
Lostash on Oct 27, 2009
Dark and mysterious feel to this one, Lady! I like it!
Shirley Shuler on Oct 27, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, dark and yes, very thought provoking, excellent piece of poetry!
Ruby Hawk on Oct 27, 2009
thought provoking and unforgettable.
Guy Hogan on Oct 27, 2009
I like the control over the language of this poem.
giftarist on Oct 28, 2009
WOW
Jane Jane on Oct 28, 2009
great piece. you\’re really good with this styles of poem.
papaleng on Oct 29, 2009
Another excellent poem, great imagery and vivid thoughts.
deep blue on Oct 31, 2009
Passionately crafted lines, well done.

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