Would you be proud what you done in life?

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If you don’t wake up tomorrow

If it turns out that today is your

last day on earth, would you be

proud what you done in this life?

because if you ain’t you better

start get it square.

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  • seanob389 on Jun 12, 2011

    Very true!

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jun 12, 2011

    very good

  • Joseph Scott on Jun 12, 2011

    Can’t argue with that!

  • The Real Poet on Jun 12, 2011

    I love your simplicity, genius.

  • megamatt09 on Jun 12, 2011

    I’d like to think I would be. A lot could happen between now and the end however.

  • lapasan on Jun 12, 2011

    this poem gives me a good advice.

  • pattiann on Jun 12, 2011

    Brilliant

  • Ebbin Jose on Jun 13, 2011

    Make a step forward,
    Take your thoughts sail.
    Make a wish for the world,
    And take it along with you.
    For that the life is so short…

  • Eva S on Jun 13, 2011

    Very nice

  • Sebastian Onciu on Jun 13, 2011

    Very concise and to the point!

  • PaulB on Jun 13, 2011

    Better get on with it!!!

  • Judy Kaelin on Jun 13, 2011

    I agree! Very nice!

  • alxymy on Jun 13, 2011

    So simple so perfect i loved it.

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