I rode with the wind.

last night in a dream

the wind came along

and said “Honey,

will you not come with me?”

i smiled at the wind,

for it brought me my friend

i reached out to the hand

that to my surprise

i had not seen for a long time

was reaching out to me

it reached out with joy

reached out with gentleness

with no presumptuous intentions

or predisposed assumptions

we flowed with the wind

quietly gliding

just listening to the silence

enjoying the tranquility

& then i realized

as my heart tugged gently

and visions entered softly

i sadly remembered

he is no longer

has moved to another place

where only the angels play

he held my hand as i cried

for i realized

i had forgotten again

& then remembered again

 i wiped my tears

because in my heart

i knew it would be okay

for one day in heaven

i will see those eyes again

& the sweet words you told me

so long ago….

“Honey, it will be okay.”

i will hear once again

for you are the only

who has ever told me

“Honey, it will be okay.”

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Comments (15)
  • PSingh1990 on Nov 29, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • yes me on Nov 29, 2010

    Nice lines in this one cheers

  • John Cornor on Nov 29, 2010

    Nice to read.Thanks for sharing.

  • My World on Nov 29, 2010

    Good Stuff.

  • tankermone on Nov 29, 2010

    Great post!

  • digital blue on Nov 29, 2010

    great work! i love how you used the wind to represent the ‘he’ in the poem. beautiful.

  • crisdiwata on Nov 30, 2010

    wind brings back the memories of the years had passed. Nice poem.

  • Brewed Coffee on Nov 30, 2010

    You must really miss him. Sad….but that is how life goes. We are always filled with longings. Someday, we will understand.

  • dino renaldo on Dec 3, 2010

    nice share

  • Likha on Dec 11, 2010

    This is a tearjerker. A refreshing one from you.

  • Jswana on Feb 20, 2011

    Very nice. I enjoyed.

  • MaxBuceo on Apr 1, 2011

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  • 1hopefulman on May 4, 2011

    Good that you remember and that you are hopeful.

  • Atanacio on Sep 8, 2011

    read this one too but forgot to comment so here goes : Great little share Frank

  • Tiki33 on May 4, 2012

    Very nice work.

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