Last Summer Day

Joe Ram on Aug 31, 2011

My first attempt at poetry. Not as easy as I thought!

Swinging on the swing,

Sliding down the slide.

The kids are so happy,

Playing at the playground.

Time for the sunset

And time for a rest

The mother calling all kids

And walk with them.

What a lovely day

The kids have had.

At home at the end

And see what’s been prepared

A yummy dinner

And some perfect snack.

When daddy comes back

The kids climb to his neck

“Hi daddy”, cried out the kids

“How are you today”, the daddy returned

What a happy day

The family has had

Prepare for tomorrow

For the new school term.

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Comments (17)

Sunjhini on Aug 31, 2011
beautiful thoughts expressed so well
Christine Ramsay on Aug 31, 2011
I can’t believe summer is over already. You have written a beautiful first poem. Well done.
Rosettaartist1 on Aug 31, 2011
Time flies!
megamatt09 on Aug 31, 2011
Summer did go by quickly.
mphsglo on Aug 31, 2011
Very nice. Paints a pretty picture.
vijayanths on Aug 31, 2011
good poem.
ashan1614 on Aug 31, 2011
Great first attempt! Poetry is all about painting a picture for the reader in a few words, and you have done that. I remeber that last night before school from my own childhood as well as my daughters’ school days.
LoveDoctor on Aug 31, 2011
Lovely poem. For some reason, summer has been long this year. There’s still Labor Day weekend
reiny on Aug 31, 2011
what a nice poem, well done..
Joe Ram on Aug 31, 2011
Thanks all for the encouragements and comments! Sounds like a good start for me!
erwinkennythomas on Aug 31, 2011
nice share!
neopisiva on Aug 31, 2011
You are doing well, don’t get discouraged!
Nice from you to share with us your first poetic experience.:)
Ruby Hawk on Aug 31, 2011
Your school is late, ours started three weeks ago. Very good poem for your first try.
KittyK on Sep 1, 2011
Our schools start on September 7th…I cannot wait for winter to arrive; this summer has been long and too warm!
juliachild on Sep 1, 2011
Nice share
juliachild on Sep 1, 2011
Nice share,…
FX777222999 on Sep 7, 2011
An author’s way of expressing a feeling of happy family. Good poem.

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