Love is a feeling. Feeling it is more than loving. People may seem to get what it takes just to get convinced that it wouldn’t last…

I tried to memorize

The dazzling of your eyes

The feel of your fingers

Where my love lingers

 

I tried to close my eyes

And I suddenly realized

I am living in a dream

No matter how true it may seem

 

Just one more touch

And I felt too much

Love I can no longer take

Now that my heart started to break

 

I am now tearing apart

Beacue you have broken my heart

Wanting more of your touch

I won’t for I no longer adhere something as such…

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  • isloooboy on May 28, 2011

    you described Beautiful feelings thanks for sharing

  • T. S. GARP on May 28, 2011

    Very nice and very sad.

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