Pamper me please.

Lavish me with your love
Showering me with affection
Let in linger upon my heart
Embracing my soul
A lilting, lyrical caress
Lifting me to the heavens
As I float upon a cloud
Writhing from your reverence
Moved by your devotion
Endlessly doting
Never ceasing
Please…
Don’t ever stop
Touch me evermore
Love me forever
Eternally

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  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 14, 2010

    Wow Lady Sunshine, Your words are like magnetic and I am like steel as they belong together. Its amazing how you have this power through your gift of writing that always draws me closer wanting more, more, and never enough of you. Another excellent poem by you as I will always be craving so much more…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • ken bultman on Jan 14, 2010

    Excellent pleading poem that leaves a pleasant after glow.

  • ken bultman on Jan 14, 2010

    Excellent pleading poem that leaves a pleasant afterglow.

  • Sourav on Jan 14, 2010

    Very well writte. It has a good flow. well done.

  • Atanacio on Jan 14, 2010

    Very well put together.. a sweet write Frank

  • Guy Hogan on Jan 14, 2010

    Your erotic poems always seem so delicate; but they really throb with sweaty passion. They’re clean and dirty at the same time. Now that’s hot.

  • Themax on Jan 14, 2010

    very well and passionate writing truly beautiful and gorgeous poem Thank you sunshine, How are you friend :)

  • willie wondka on Jan 14, 2010

    i love your poem forever more

  • Shirley Shuler on Jan 14, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, simply beautiful. You say it all so well!

  • Linda Lori on Jan 15, 2010

    Lovely and romantic piece!

  • giftarist on Jan 15, 2010

    Wow, simply fantastic!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 15, 2010

    A very beautiful and romantic piece. You do these so well.

    Christine

  • bailieman on Jan 15, 2010

    Lovely, warm and heartfelt.

  • standingproud on Jan 15, 2010

    Don’t ever stop, love me for ever.
    Brilliant Lady sunshine, don’t ever stop.X.

  • deep blue on Jan 15, 2010

    Well crafted poem with passionate touch. Well done.

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