A fictional poem I jotted down just off of a thought I had.

He lies there dying

His peers all crying

He lets out a sigh as he grows nigh to death

But even as his health leaves him

He lets out a few final words of his personal wisdom

You cant go through life wishing it was better

You’re the only one who can make it what you want

Whether you want to wallow in self pity

Or whether you want to leave sorrow; leave shitty behind

It’s all in your hands

No can tell you what to do unless you let them

So believe in what you do and do what you want

His eyes glaze over with the presence of tears

His peers all praise him for the bravery he had

Slower and slower his breaths came to him

Until the lights dimmed for him

And emptiness consumed his once brillinat blue eyes

His once wiry frame relaxed into submission to death

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