Grateful thanks for the honour you all bestow.

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Lee Altman, Good Day

Sir, you take the cake,

You take my heart from me,

Now tell me how I will breathe.

Your electrifying kiss, given by your dear wife,

Also reminds me,

I was electrocuted that day,

That’s why my spouse does still abide with me.

At the lovely feet and in softy lap,

I always ever shall relax,

Now what’s this?

You will say,

How it’s coming from Lovely Honey

I just mentioned her, as a she,

But is she, really a she.

I love you all whatever I may be,

But for ever it will always be me,

Your very own, Lovely Honey.

Thanks for including my name,

I am proud of you,

And my Triond name,

Lovely Honey,

Will ever remain

Thanks to others also,

Who read me,

I will ever remain

The Lovely Honey,

Which I give and share,

So me to anyone else,

Do not ever compare.

Lovely Honey is my name,

Of my sex I have no shame.

Love to all of you again and again,

Please remember me for ever,

Love sprinkled with honey,

I shall always remain,

‘’L…H…

I say it once more and again,

And once more again, till it’s again.

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  • Darla Smith on Mar 3, 2009

    Very nice!

  • Lee Altman on Mar 3, 2009

    Thank you from the bottom of my heart, You made me smile today.
    Lovely Honey You are so grand
    It doesn’t matter if your woman or man
    With your poetry you make your stand
    Giving others a hopeful hand.
    thanks again,
    Lee Altman

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 3, 2009

    Dear Mr Altman,

    You floor me
    You allure me
    You assure me
    And what lures me most that you adore me a woman or a man it’s my duty if I can make anyone smile whenever I can/
    Man and woman is an attitude of mind, I have seen more women with more spunk than men and I have seen men so supine they do not seem to have even a spine. Hope I am still doing fine and your thanks me remind more folks this world needs is of, not my but your kind. When we meet some day maybe in dreams or across the internet you will be surprised this I can bet.

    LH

  • Vikram Chhabra on Mar 3, 2009

    A great tribute!

  • monica55 on Mar 3, 2009

    A nice tribute to Lee. But the rest of us are jealous, where is ours? NLOL :=(
    Monica

  • CutestPrincess on Mar 4, 2009

    a good tribute… you’re such a nice poet and person, lovely honey!

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