Some lessons which I have learnt from my life, which i’m trying to apply in my life & also helping others to benifit from them.
Don’t be sad if it has fallen from your hand
Start a new life in a magical new land.
Have faith, there’s everything you can mend
Without efforts life comes to an end.
Life, its like a chocolate having different layers
Whenever it turns sour, you can call few prayers.
Run on the beach, or you can just lay
Do what you want & say what you need to say
Have no fear in giving it another try
You know you’ll ultimately learn how to fly.
Hi
I really like this. Well written and a good flow 
Emmie
Thanks alot Emmie.
Well ! Different minds, different perspectives ..
Life seems like a chocolate to me because the upper layer might be different from the outer one of the life as chocolate bar.
It might be crunchy from outside but creamy from inside.
Might be delicious from inside etc.. lol !
As far as the other difference of opinion is concerned, that is \’the more effort you put, it might happen that the it gets worse\’ – (i respect your perspective) but i don\’t subscribe to this view because i believe the world isnt imbalanced.. it cant be the way that if you put more you still dont get more.
It might happen that you get less for the time being but the effort you have put will not go wasted. you\’ll get the reward of your efforts, your hardwork & honesty.
& even if you are not getting results at that very moment, at that time giving up & stopping your input of efforts will do no good, you gotta keep watering to get the fruit.
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Thanks alot for looking upon it & letting me know what you all think about it.
I appreciate your comments & feedback, please let me know if you find any mistakes or ways by which i can improve my skills.
Thanks !
Hey ! Emmie – thanks alot for the feedback ..
SleepingBeauty – i also pray the same, i would love to have your word in future as well.
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