Haiku – reflection.

I had let her go
The least a lover can do
For a dream come true

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  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 3, 2012

    I had to let a man go once. Well, actually I never had him, but I stopped loving him because he was toxic to me being a thief.
    Great haiku

  • johnmariow on Aug 3, 2012

    Very intriguing. It can be the topic of prose containing the complete story.

  • lovebytes on Aug 3, 2012

    I attract older men for some strange reason and then they get vengeful when I let them go.

  • stevetheblogger on Aug 3, 2012

    Martin you prove my point you poets are wonderful.
    Best Wishes

  • smokychristine on Aug 4, 2012

    Letting go is hard to do.

  • Jswana on Aug 4, 2012

    If you can let someone go at the height of your love for them is a gift but actually it’s the truest form of love! Nice.

  • LadyElena on Aug 4, 2012

    She will be back if she is meant to be yours. Nice Haiku.

  • elee on Aug 4, 2012

    Quite,exactly.Of course.

  • Steven West on Aug 4, 2012

    Very expressive in a few words.

  • Derdriu on Aug 6, 2012

    Martin, That’s life as well as drama, history, philosophy, and psychology all wrapped up in one succinct three-lined 27-syllabled poem.
    Respectfully, and with many thanks for sharing the imagery, the sounds, and the words, Derdriu

  • avissado on Aug 6, 2012

    you couldn’t be more true!

  • Tiki33 on Aug 7, 2012

    What a cute haiku!

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