A story for the criticism.

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So you just gonna knock me because I lack a degree and can’t write as perfect as you.

 I need to use spell check more yeah this is true,

but we have something in common, yeah and you already know we do,

 I am writer on triond just like you,

You seem like you do it to earn an income too

 I write what I feel and what I been through

 can you tell the world the bad things about me and never point a finger at you

but I don’t point fingers or place my self on high

to do so is just ignorance blatantly living a lie

No ones perfect and everyone makes mistakes

its how we learn how we grow and how we find a better fate

there is not enough love in the world so no time for hate

helping someone up at times is what I appreciate

why berate and  belittle like your feces negates

 a foul aroma I guess your arrogance stinks enough

and you publish on triond trying to criticize us

you make me sick

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  • Joni Keith on Mar 2, 2009

    The way I see it, if they inspire you to write, then they’re worth something. Personally, I think you write straight from the heart and that’s the best kind of writing. Please keep it up!

  • mary jo on Mar 2, 2009

    See, this is why I don’t like to even say anything. So I guess I won’t anymore! This has really hurt my feelings and I don’t even know you! Well, actually I guess I do, mean that’s what you are!

  • papaleng on Mar 3, 2009

    wonderful, honest and pure emotions that comes deep in the heart. you send your message powerfully. I like this.

  • Minister Marlene on Jan 6, 2011

    You’ve got. It’s called talent. We all have to work on grammer sometimes. Every author hires an editor eventually.. Haven”t read all your stuff. This piece has heart!

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