Let Me Know Your Den

Idlepen on Jul 7, 2010

Somewhere you live, or
Are you dead?

Somewhere you live, or

Are you dead?

Let me know your den

Open your door

I fear

They too fear even

Where is the hell, I don’t know

I see red alert in the rainbow

Over your sky

I feel shy and shy

They cry

And we cry

Hunt me and our men

Why do you hide in heaven?

Feel my pain

Our pain

Their pain

Hungry days and dying nights

I fight

They fight

We fight

Bury us and

Our pain

We scream

They scream

Some where you live,

Or are you dead?

Let me know your den

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Comments (12)

Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 7, 2010
Simple but heartfelt.
write4money on Jul 7, 2010
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giftarist on Jul 7, 2010
A poignant piece, friend. Cheers.
Rohit19 on Jul 7, 2010
A lovely piece. You just showcased how a simple poem can be made effective.

Thanks!
TwiKnight on Jul 8, 2010
A well-worded piece, one might say.
sasuke191 on Jul 8, 2010
A poem with feelings!.. Nice!!.. ^^
wonder on Jul 8, 2010
A lovely yearning.
yes me on Jul 8, 2010
nice one Idle cheers
rajaryanme on Jul 8, 2010
Nicely written poem friend.
Atanacio on Jul 8, 2010
you know I kinda like your style
Starpisces on Jul 8, 2010
when read on, feel the pain….well expressed.
Eunice Tan on Jul 8, 2010
Very good poem, we need meditate on this.

Hi there!