A poem about missing summertime when the cold of winter comes around.


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Let the sun shine upon me,
Oh, I don’t want it to fade away
That’s the best thing about
Warm summer days.

When Autumn falls upon this midwest town,
That’s the end of the beautiful sunshine
I’d give anything to be anywhere else
When the snow starts to shower down

It will be months, until the bad weather strays
Awaiting for sun; on those dark, cold days
The winter makes my bones freeze
All I am asking for is some warmth, please?

Oh, won’t you let the sunshine
Stay for a lifetime
Raining down from the sky
When winter days are not as bright

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  • Dr.Elayaraja on Nov 2, 2009

    Mild warm poem…

    Good description of the cold season and warm sun…

    It is said that ‘you will be needing the shadows only when you are in the sun’… When u r in shadows you never care about it…

    kudos…

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 2, 2009

    It would be so wonderful to have sunshine all the time, as long as it was not too hot. This is such a beautiful piece. Well done.

    Christine

  • Goodselfme on Nov 2, 2009

    Nice poem . I like Autumn.

  • Will Gray on Nov 2, 2009

    Beautiful!

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Nov 3, 2009

    It would be great to feel the sun’s warm rays all the time. But cold is also good lol

  • STEVE666 on Nov 4, 2009

    Yeah, know where you’re coming from on this. Good write, PE.

  • Nydia Esther on Nov 4, 2009

    :) great write!

  • Nydia Esther on Nov 4, 2009

    very nicely done!

  • Trinitaria on Nov 14, 2009

    Beautiful!

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