Life is like riding this flyer.

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Buddies, let’s enjoy the ride

You at one side, I another side

Riding with friends so much fun

We can ride till the set of sun

If you feel dizzy after the spin

I have the medicated oil with me 

Life is like this hand-made flyer

Can be complicated can be simple

Some find this flyer fun and creative

While some think it is kind of childish

As long as you think it makes you happy

Who cares whether this game is silly

Come on, join me, soon there will be a queue

I feel safe and secured if I take this with you

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Comments (15)
  • Tulan on Aug 6, 2011

    Hey, I want one of those. I love swings.

  • LCM Linda on Aug 6, 2011

    Star, count me to ride with you. Lovely poem. I view this as fun. :wink:

  • wonder on Aug 6, 2011

    I would love to watch you only, I don’t know how that oil will help me, I feel dizzy.

  • Uma Shankari on Aug 6, 2011

    I am ready too. Nice one.

  • Saurav Banerjee on Aug 7, 2011

    I have enjoyed the ride through your writing. Thanks for this great share.

  • BeatsMe on Aug 7, 2011

    Wow. I like those cute smileys hugging. :)

  • Lady Sunshine on Aug 7, 2011

    Spin, spin, spin! Wee! :D

  • PR Mace on Aug 7, 2011

    Looks like good childhood fun.

  • vijayanths on Aug 7, 2011

    Interesting share.

  • Francois Hagnere on Aug 7, 2011

    If you have the medicated oil with you then…lol

  • papaleng on Aug 7, 2011

    Ah, I guess I old enough for that ride. LOL

  • Videomark on Aug 7, 2011

    I see the chances of someone getting hurt on that thing as being pretty high.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 7, 2011

    My kids would have loved that.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Aug 7, 2011

    Should be fun for the adventurous.

  • CA Johnson on Aug 8, 2011

    I would love to take a ride with you. LOL!

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