About love.

Come to me in the night,
and lets sail away,
To where the sun shines brighter,
and it doesn’t go down for days

There will be love,
and there will be us
You and I,
Hearts as one

Will you awaken by my side,
and whisper in my ear
Words so soft and gentle
That no one else could hear?

We’ll float above the clouds
Straight up to the ninth
We won’t come down for hours
Not until the sun is out of sight

The streets will be filled with life,
and the sky will turn into a sunset;
Fire golden hue
and love will be in the air

If I said something wrong,
and it made you upset,
would you let me in,
and forgive me?

Let’s leave this broken night,
and together find a place where there is healing
There we will find love
and we will sail off into the sunset

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Comments (10)
  • jimy1666 on Jan 10, 2009

    nice I like it.

  • Will Gray on Jan 10, 2009

    Very beautiful and great imagery!

  • papaleng on Jan 10, 2009

    I agree with both jimy and Will, this so sweet and beautiful. thanks for sharing.

  • Jasin on Jan 10, 2009

    Wondeful, hearfelt poem of love, great work!

  • Joie Schmidt on Jan 10, 2009

    So absolutely beautiful*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • drewjthomas on Jan 11, 2009

    wonderful! its in the poem from the start to the end and line by line of sustained gusts of enthusiasm for the night’s imminence at/of sailing

    –drewj…

  • macon on Jan 11, 2009

    i fell inlove with the poem… nice!

  • mysticdave on Jan 12, 2009

    i like your work

  • visionvision on Jan 15, 2009

    love is sublime

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 23, 2009

    That is such a beautiful and meaningful piece and so well written.

    Christine

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