An answered prayer.

Its being a while now since i last spoke your name,
Its being a while now since i told you how much i love you,
I am watching you every moment of every day,
Speak my name when ever you need me for i am near you,
Open your heart  to me for i will open the heavens for you,
Dream of me at nite and i will embrace you with open arms,
Remember our times together and we will play in the garden of Eden,
remember my most precious son, i am only a dream away,
Sending you blessing for every second of your precious life

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  • Darla Smith on Feb 22, 2009

    This is a very nice poem. I like it a lot.

  • revivor on Feb 23, 2009

    This has a lovely rhythm – I was almost putting it to music as I read it!! Lines like “we will play in the garden of Eden” are really great – simple, but evoking such large and meaningful images. Nice work – revivor

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