I breathe on it…not know many but lies last not forever whilst love does…

sometimes your soul lies

sometimes you lie that your soul lies

equally deceptive can be your alight eyes

do you expect to be loved for that or despised?

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  • sandynpj on Jun 25, 2011

    lies are always deceptive

  • Imran on Jun 25, 2011

    At first I was like; “Hooray, new post from Krupali!”

    Then I was like; “This poem is making me sad”

    Maybe one day you’ll tell us what the real-life source is for these poems, because I feel like they have a common theme of otherworldly pain, but also otherworldly love.

    Bye!!

  • Krupali on Jun 27, 2011

    This is not about personal love or pain but the hypocrite species out there. Hardly any person reveals what his true soul is like. Most of them just wanna be loved OR despised for a false image they create for themselves. Many don’t even understand themselves and just try to imitate the ones on magazine covers or novel characters.

  • Krupali on Jun 27, 2011

    usually the eyes reflect the soul. but you cannot judge anyone from his eyes either ’cause they can be deceptive enough

  • Krupali on Jun 27, 2011

    ” …judge *many* from their eyes… “

  • Imran on Jun 27, 2011

    lol @ imitating novel characters.

    I wanna be Mowgli from the Jungle Book. hehe.

  • Aiyanna on Jun 29, 2011

    Creation never lies but instead the controller of the soul is the one who chooses the pathway to follow by lying to themselves ultimately causing the biggest blemish to their name.
    The master of the soul is your actions and what you make of it is the reaction of who and what you want it to become…
    Choose your life’s actions wisely and your soul shall remain blemish free and you don’t have to life to yourself then….

  • Know Emotion on Jun 30, 2011

    Thank you for your kind words about my latest poems! You are truly correct…the eyes never lie. Many believe that it’s the body language but the story is truly in one’s eyes.

  • Redfiery on Jul 6, 2011

    this one left me with a teary eyes….i feel this and can relate even…ur a sensitive poetess..

  • Imran on Jul 31, 2011

    The success with which a trader can learn to read ever-changing market patterns may be related to the quality and extent of training he or she undertakes. Every major study of implicit learning finds that it takes thousands of concentrated learning trials before an individual develops mastery of a task. Most traders fail, I would suggest, because they never develop the critical mass of intensive learning trials needed for subconscious expertise. Without a team environment to model skills, motivate skill development, and provide goal-oriented coaching, the majority of individual traders may never develop the self-efficacy needed to weather inevitable periods of loss and flat performance. This is particularly problematic for the part-time trader, who may lack the intensive practice needed for mastery simply as a function of the reduced amount of time available to internalize market patterns, rehearse execution skills, and utilize feedback.
    While much market writing focuses on the development of new indicators or methods for analyzing market data, it may well be the case that the most promising avenues for improving trading performance are tools and technologies that supercharge learning and accelerate the learning curve.

  • Krupali on Aug 2, 2011

    What is the point you making? Why the troll?

  • Imran on Aug 3, 2011

    I was gonna send this to you on Twitter, but it would have been too long to post.

    I liked what it had to say about a “trader going through thousands of repetitions of chart patterns” before being able to clearly see the market. I thought you’d appreciate it too, but I was wrong.

    I am not trolling you.

    Sorry.

  • Imran on Aug 3, 2011

    Am I not allowed to share trading-related stuff with you?

  • Krupali on Aug 3, 2011

    Well, it’s trading-related stuff but it has to much to tell on the philosophical front. Wise, really wise.
    Thanks for the share.

  • Imran on Aug 3, 2011

    Yeah, it\’s from psychologist/trading coach Dr. Brett Steenbarger.

    The man is a blessing for us traders.

    Do you actively trade in India?

  • Krupali on Aug 3, 2011

    Hell, no! I have to learn & observe before I put anything at stake.

  • Imran on Aug 3, 2011

    Ahh, that’s something most traders unfortunately don’t do.

    Very smart. You’re taking the W.D. Gann route.

  • Elove Poetry on Aug 8, 2011

    piece of advice, my advice

    the soul is a liar, it’s lying to u… don’t listen to it

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