Life’s a Pimple

Ben donovan on Jan 18, 2009

Just a funny I got while dealing with lifes little pimples.

Building problems from with- in
The skin now swelling

An irritating redness that
Brings attention to the eyes,

For care needs to be given soon.
The solutions cure

Is to add external
Pressure, the squeeze.

Till that problem pops,
Spilling out the ooze
Of truth contained.

When under the skin of liven,
Better to squeeze the truth
Than carry obvious irritation.

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Comments (4)

Pablina on Jan 18, 2009
nice poem, descriptive. bit gross though lol
dawn xoc on Jan 20, 2009
LOL! I get the feeling that the spot is an allegory lifes problems. To squeeze or not to squeeze that is the question?
Angie0000023 on Jan 25, 2009
haha nice way of putting the two together…. loved it!
it was good
hfj on Feb 7, 2009
Ain’t that the truth. Right now in America, we are a big pimple that keeps getting bigger. We need a relief of pressure soon. Well done.

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