Life and Death

livemike on Nov 30, 2009

Some inner thoughts.

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The silent call has come in a time destined for us all

The shock and disbelief in the reason for it now

Time rewinds to the most cherished memories in the past

wiping away all the troubles of a grown up child

desperate to find the purpose to such bitter hurts

The ones that make me a better man

No point holding on now as he slips away

To a world unknown to the naked truth

Watching a life unfold as another comes to its end

Is a pain Ive have learnt to know so well

The search for the reason keep the pain at bay

Maybe someday it will be made clear to me when my time comes

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LoveDoctor on Nov 30, 2009
You expressed it well. Lovely and sentimental. During tough times we must keep the faith and remain strong. Great poem.
ceegirl on Nov 30, 2009
well said
Linda Lori on Nov 30, 2009
Honest and moving. Great write!
giftarist on Dec 1, 2009
Great piece, at some point thought-provoking!
Darla Cooke on Dec 1, 2009
Very touching!
cutedrishti8 on Dec 1, 2009
Mike a very great poem..Really touched the Heart..
PhoenixRox on Dec 30, 2009
Mikey, this was so from the heart. Stay strong and I am always there for you. God bless your entire family.
tonywriter on Jan 13, 2010
well said and nice poem Thanx!
LoveDoctor on Jan 13, 2010
It’s during our most difficult times that we must remain strong. “Watching a life unfold as another comes to its end is a pain I’ve have learned to know so well.” touching, heartfelt and moving. I know you’ve been through a lot already, but God does work in miraculuous ways so keep the faith and head up. You still have a lot to do with your life and goals to achieve before your time comes. So don’t think about that please or you will make me sad. Excellent poetry mikey. keep up the good work:)

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