Life Comic

2tet on Mar 15, 2009

This is a comical composition about life.

Here are some definitions of LIFE with its comical opposites.

Life of a kid is a playful resisting world

Life of a teenager is to dream love’s cord

Life for an adult is a sizzling sword

For the senior, Life is a fulfilling told

An upper class does have a jumpy fruitful Life

And middle class embraces a Life of a tickling knife

While the poor enjoys happy crime Life

Life for evil doers is a temporal strategic disposal

Life for those who lives at purgatory is a balanced proposal

Finally, Life of healthy living is a boring standout cardinal

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Comments (8)

MyMomsFlipped on Mar 15, 2009
Powerful & so meaningful! Great job…I loved it!
Kate Smedley on Mar 15, 2009
Some interesting opposites there, I like this.
Mr Ghaz on Mar 16, 2009
lovely Poem! Nicely done!
CutestPrincess on Mar 17, 2009
Your work speaks for its self! Great Job!
Majic on Mar 21, 2009
Boring standout cardinal? hahaha! It’s true in most times for the overly-conscious dieters, but not for me!
I enjoyed this piece!
miraj on Mar 22, 2009
still loving the last line,A very unique yet potent presentation indeed.

my deepest respect and gratitude,2tet
LOVE IS ALL

Walk in beauty change the world.
macon on Mar 23, 2009
haha. nice one! i enjoyed reading this! quite comical as you say!
She Bear on Mar 29, 2009
Different kinda style, suits the subject

Hi there!