Should continue to remain traveled.

This long and winding road
I never know which will end
Seemed far away to continue my live
Full of twists that sometimes I do not understand

This road was also ended
Despite continued time after time I passed
To know where the end
Let me to sleep for a moment

The road is still not over
There is no place to stop
There was also no wind rustling sound that caressed
To simply breathe the air for missing shortness

The road is still not over
I passed every twists continue
Not a strong taste for completion
But I can not turn around

This road has not ended
Day and night I still have to live
Until I can understand
That road is no other than myself.

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  • bigpapadan on Dec 16, 2010

    uiputra – very nice. The lines flow well here and I feel the meloncholy of the subject well.

  • Anastasia Zoldak on Dec 17, 2010

    Well Done! Nice use of words and word flow to create a rhythm.

  • uiputra on Dec 17, 2010

    Thanks for the comments that you both gave.

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 18, 2010

    lovely beautiful poem.

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