A poem of encouragement.

Your eyes reflect

a mystery deeply buried

in the shadows of your past.

Varied emotions dance

in those pools of blue

carefully shrouded

with neutral shades

of indifference and complacency.

Surely you have subdued

all the pain and miseries well.

But like a hungry flame,

they lick up everything

that comes in their way-

destroying friendships,

obliterating dreams,

vanquishing hopes,

breaking lives.

Why do you keep holding on

to the failures of  the past?

Why are you afraid to let go

of those unpleasant memories?

Are they as precious as life itself?

How can you move on

if you wallow in your despair

and dwell in your loss?

Life goes on no matter what.

The earth does not stop revolving

to wait for you,

so shed those extra baggage

that slows down your journey.

All around you

are goodness and beauty

and within your heart

lies hope –

dormant yet powerful.

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  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jul 5, 2009

    No matter how bitter and how pain the life should go on. Very well written poem, my friend. Keep it up! I’ll behind you and you’ve my liked it.

  • Darla Cooke on Jul 5, 2009

    Very good poem.

  • Unofre Pili on Jul 5, 2009

    Consummately enjoyed this piece. Very fine, ok kaayo kabs.

  • kairos on Jul 5, 2009

    thanks for the encouragement to go on

  • Lady Sunshine on Jul 5, 2009

    So true, life goes on, it doesn’t stop for no one. A nice piece to give hope and encouragement. Thank you, Melody.

  • Jenny Heart on Jul 5, 2009

    Spoken with true wisdom. Like it!

  • Mr Ghaz on Jul 5, 2009

    This is really touching and lovely poem..I LOVED it..thanx for sharing

  • Inna Tysoe on Jul 5, 2009

    Well written.

    Thank you,

    Inna

  • Debra. on Jul 5, 2009

    Mel, this is an awesome, inspiring and powerful piece! Such a wonderful message to convey. I loved it!

  • goodselfme on Jul 5, 2009

    A nice uplifting message and nicely penned as well.

  • clay hurtubise on Jul 5, 2009

    Nice message, well done.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Joie Schmidt on Jul 5, 2009

    Beautiful*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • George W Whitehead on Jul 5, 2009

    Lovely poem, Melody.

  • Judy Sheldon on Jul 5, 2009

    “lies hope – dormant yet powerful” this is so inspiring.

    Thanks & God bless.

  • Joe Dorish on Jul 5, 2009

    Nicely done!

  • MJ Taylor on Jul 5, 2009

    Touching piece of literature and so true.

  • Dewan Golam Shafi Choudhury on Jul 5, 2009

    I enjoyed this! I have also written one lol! I hate it that Life moves on and people change!

  • PR Mace on Jul 5, 2009

    Well written.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 5, 2009

    Wonderful sentiment,

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 6, 2009

    Absolutely. Beautiful, inspiring and well composed poetry. I love it! Liz

  • Eunice Tan on Jul 6, 2009

    Very encouraging

  • abdulhafeez on Jul 6, 2009

    very inspiring poem.i love your good work.

  • kate smedley on Jul 6, 2009

    beautiful encouraging piece

  • D Light on Jul 6, 2009

    very nice good piece of a wholesome message

  • ken bultman on Jul 6, 2009

    Wonderful poem with excellent advice.

  • Sheila M on Jul 6, 2009

    A wonderful message!

  • Poetic Enigma on Jul 6, 2009

    Beautiful poem
    Very well written,
    Thanks for sharing!

  • Phill Senters on Jul 7, 2009

    Thanks for such an encouraging poem, Melody. Nice work.

  • MMV Abad on Jul 8, 2009

    So powerful and encouraging. Thank you!

  • rizzei on Jul 8, 2009

    right! encouragement is in the air when i read this:)

  • OhSugar on Jul 8, 2009

    Encouraging, inspiring, powerful and beautiful.. I guess you can say, I love it. A definite click from me.

  • bearhugs on Jul 8, 2009

    Great poem! Thanks!

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Jul 17, 2009

    Melody, that is encouraging…and creative, thoughtful, hopeful, and true to life. Brian

  • Moses Ingram on Jul 20, 2009

    Beautiful, inspiring, and well written.

  • CutestPrincess on Jul 25, 2009

    thanks for the encouraging words…

  • fragile18 on Jul 31, 2009

    very inspiring. define life: it goes on. :)

  • Jeremy James Noye on Aug 13, 2009

    Absolutely beautiful work!

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