An insight into the slum life, their hardships and treasures.

Crippling wobbly doors,

That the slum adores.

Ready-to-fell walls

I wonder how they all,

Live with ease in that trash,

Or what they call ‘home’.

Never complaining,

They have made up with life.

It’s hardships theirs,

Without money and heirs.

The sewage runs on the road,

Home to all the germs.

The disease their companion,

And deaths occur like illusion.

Some die while others survive,

As they have made up with life.

They eat food in days,

I wonder how they breathe,

With that smiling face!

They don’t read books,

But sell them as waste.

They don’t know the alphabet,

But the numbers on currency.

And,

They cherish old clothes and shoes,

With heart warming fancy.

They work till wee hours,

Never earn enough!

The rich spend millions,

With a plastic laugh.

They don’t want millions,

But food and the way,

That opens doors of hope

And the fate.

Sometimes I wonder,

Sometimes I hate!

But then I realize,

At least,

Slum life is not a bait.

They don’t cry in difficulties.

They know how to deal

For the life has made them strong,

Through the hardships that frown,

The rich and the middle,

Only poor survive with life’s treasure.

I want to apologize to all my friends. I am sorry that I could not go through all of yours articles in past 1 week. Actually I had exams in school and that left me with very little time to read articles..I am sorry. Hope all of you forgive me…(And one more thing..the word ‘Bait’ that I have used in the poem means that the world is like a rattrap and the Bait’ is the luxuries..one who gets caught in luxuries never gets out..)

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  • sunnyiam on Jul 6, 2010

    good one..well presented..

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 6, 2010

    My friend, I thought you are far away in the states, where I live, what you just wrote about is the hard reality. I felt it to the bone and that picture too….

  • Atanacio on Jul 6, 2010

    another very good entry

  • giftarist on Jul 6, 2010

    I agree with Leo, what you wrote is the hard reality.

  • wonder on Jul 7, 2010

    You have portrayed their life so well,a heart-rending article.They have to be strong.

  • Rohit19 on Jul 7, 2010

    One of the better poems I have read post joining Triond.
    Even I have always wondered how they manage to smile and be content with their lives so much, despite being so deprived. I feel really very sad for the lives they lead. Hard reality – even harder to accept.

    I would be glad if I could do anything for the underprivileged so that even they could view life with a better perspective and realize their infinite hidden potential.

    Thanks!

  • rajaryanme on Jul 7, 2010

    Very well written poem with a message. And Thanks for explaining at the bottom. No need to say sorry because exams should be first priority. Keep writing good stuff like these.

  • NIYATI BHAT on Jul 8, 2010

    Hey Rohit it’s very kind of you to think so much about them. Do go along to do something for them. All the best :)

  • charanjitsingh chandhok on Jul 10, 2010

    They are soulful they enjoy life
    Others do just but eat material

  • Fatema on Oct 2, 2010

    good work :)

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