This poem is for remembrance day and it is about life in the trenches. It is much cruder then I normally write in poetry,however; as I envisioned life in the trenches, it wasn’t sweet and pretty,it was nasty and cruel,death everywhere and no where to hide from it. My great grandfather, Harold Leadbetter served both in world war one and world war two, in the trenches for the first world war and stationed in Briton as an air force captain for the second war. I can clearly remember my mom telling me that every time she would ask him questions about the war he would break down and cry because the memories were so horrendous and then he would open a bottle to try and forget. Personally I believe to survive something like that you needed a lot of anger and courage and I tried to put as much of that into this poem as I possibly could.

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Ducking through the trenches
A bullet whizzed by
The stench of death appalling
He didn’t want to die

Blood flesh and bones
His friends lay fallen
In this damned trench
Death comes callen

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Peeping over
The smell of gunfire filled the air
Loading his rifle
His bullets did not feel the fear

Charlie echo tango
The enemy would feel the wrath
Coordinations set
For the bombers path

Flying high in the sky
Bombs dropping everywhere
Enemy do you see them now
Enemy do you feel our fear

Run you little bastards
Run
All your work
Has come undone

God damn you all
Right to your grave
For the death you have brought
To my friends
In the trenches
The men of brave

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Copyright © 2009 Tanya Kime-Wallace

 

 

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  • Lostash on Nov 4, 2009

    I’m sure it was just goddamn awful for them and this is a great piece. I hope everyone has bought their poppies this year!

  • Diverseblogger on Nov 4, 2009

    Great poem! This is one of the best poems that I have read on Triond honestly! Keep up the great work

  • Teves on Nov 4, 2009

    Nicely written…

  • AlmaG on Nov 4, 2009

    All I can say is WOW!!!!
    Fantastic Poem ^_^

  • ken bultman on Nov 4, 2009

    The imagery was there. It brought those wars to life. Remembrance Day must equate to our Memorial Day. I shall seek out a poppy on your behalf. A very good poem, Tan.

  • RS Wing on Nov 4, 2009

    Great prose and illustrations of war. Humanity at our worst as history does seem to repeat itself. WW I was a nasty one and your Grandfathers memories must have been chilling….then WW II, Dear Lord he probably needed the bottle to fight off the demons of war. Very sentimental prose and sad.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 4, 2009

    I feel that all soldiers are victims of their governments and their societies. We are all to blame and we never learn.

  • David Crerand on Nov 4, 2009

    Your willingness to try to step into the character of someone facing such horror is commendable and very brave. Knowing how the memories tortured your grandfather, you at least understand the need to keep them alive. Wonderful poem, motivated by a caring heart. Well done!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 4, 2009

    We who are not a war will never know the horror.My dad, brother, son, and grandsons have all been to war and I know I will never know what they have gone through in my most vivid imagination. Your work is brilliant.Thanks for remembering our warriors.

  • Themax on Nov 5, 2009

    very sad,Thank you:)

  • giftarist on Nov 5, 2009

    Great imagery, and I like this piece very much..Great work!

  • papaleng on Nov 5, 2009

    One word to describe your poem. Superb!

  • Borneon on Nov 5, 2009

    It is a very sad poem although it is short but very deep

  • Starpisces on Nov 5, 2009

    Very well composed piece, the words, the pictures.. when read, can feel the cruelty of war and the pain of the lost ones and innocent lives lost. I really wish “PEACE ON EARTH”.
    Good job Tanya!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 5, 2009

    A very well written poem.

  • lillyrose on Nov 5, 2009

    that was a lovely poem, with great imagery but you poor Grandfather having to fight in both!

  • Patrick Bernauw on Nov 5, 2009

    A very strong poem… and crude? Yes, but so was “life in the trenches” too… Here in Flanders, we still see the marks of the Great War everywhere…

  • Karen Gross on Nov 5, 2009

    We have heard it so often that it\’s lost its impact but \”War is Hell\”. I have never personally experienced either war or hell, but I pray that I never experience either.

  • deep blue on Nov 7, 2009

    Sorry for the late comment, oftentimes I’m about to click “submit comment” when my laptop shuts down and I could hardly get on back again. This is a passionate theme of poetry for those who had been buried in the muddy ditch to get us to a future rich with history and war memorabilias. Always a great piece from you, Tanya.

    Will

  • Patrick Regoniel on Nov 7, 2009

    Ah, the folly of war. You captured it Tanya. Thanks.

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