Very good imagery – I was never very good at swimming!

life is unpredictable….nice written

You are so right. Lovely work.

Christine

Very nice!

So true! If only I knew how to swim. I love your haiku

great depth in this one

Go wherever the tides take us, we are little fish in a big pond, but we can still enjoy the journey!

though short and simple, but very meaningful poem.
Bravo

thats very very true

Loved that!

nice article more info needed

Very well written…I like it…

I liked this thoughtful insight on life.

Wonderful haiku

Short but meaningful write.

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Nice. I used to write poems, but couldn’t write now. BTW pls check my first article- http://quazen.com/recreation/collecting/stamps-its-more-than-a-piece-of-paper/

Thanks!

I just love Haiku… It is so much fun you may never want to stop

True words mingled well.

Great poem, meaningful.

Lovely

That’s so true, lovely words.

enjoyed this one it says more than the mere words imply

great haiku… simple but meaningful…

what surprises me is that Darla Smith
hasn’t commented the way she taught me
a haiku was composed

5 7 5

and another guy said its about nature’s weather mostly
you may kindly educate us
though the piece is marvellous.

A truly nice poem here, check this one of mine,
http://authspot.com/poetry/the-heart-is-a-deep-ocean-of-secrets/

Truly, we are a swimmer with different destinations and finish lines.

Very true. Welcome aboard Triond.

nice haiku