Life is Very Important

stranger007 on Jun 15, 2010

I write this poem when I come to know about the preciousness of life. I hope you will also appreciate this poem and the importance of life.

This life is very important,

Also, it is very shorten.

So, don’t spend this time in ignorance,

We don’t have tolerance.

Try to become patience,

Deeds of love, we need to enhance.

Try to become intelligent,

By keeping in your mind the omnipotent.

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Comments (20)

emmy19 on Jun 15, 2010
Very interesting and realistic facts. I like it
Eunice Tan on Jun 15, 2010
Agree 100%
amanda casey on Jun 15, 2010
Life is important, I agree with you! Nice poem.
suhail on Jun 15, 2010
yeh i can relate almost died few days back … LOVE LIFE PEOPLE ! !
Lord Banks on Jun 15, 2010
A nice poem with very true words, well done. LB
rajaryanme on Jun 15, 2010
yeah life is important in many manners.
papaleng on Jun 15, 2010
Indeed life is precious, a very good poem.
indu on Jun 15, 2010
life is important for us,nice writing
EricPinola on Jun 15, 2010
Life-live it and love it!

EP
giftarist on Jun 15, 2010
Live on!
sara20 on Jun 17, 2010
Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

Thanks and cheers.
Sara
write4money on Jun 17, 2010
Nice piece.
Good information is available here, and keeps on writing.
Anjalina….
Domenico Cigliano on Jun 18, 2010
Poignant and worthy plea, thank you
Yalonda on Jun 18, 2010
Yes, life is very precious! It shouldn’t be wasted.
nayabingi on Jun 22, 2010
Short and precise, i like it
njokim on Jun 29, 2010
very true and relistic,nice article
sasuke191 on Jun 29, 2010
Life is important and meaningful if you live it well, the way you are supposed to.. ^^
Steve Weitzner on Jul 1, 2010
Interseting piece – very enjoyabe to read.
carissimi on Jul 15, 2010
lovely indeed!
ittech on Sep 5, 2011
thanks

Hi there!