Life Measured by the Breath We Take

Alaina Ellington on Oct 16, 2008

Tags: Anger, breathe, breaths, feel, feeling, Life, live, living, love

What if life were counted by the breaths we take? How would you live your life?

What if life were counted
by the breaths we take?
Would you take life for granted?
Would people still act fake?
Would you choose to get angry
or control the way you feel,
so when you breathe
you could be sincere?
And how would you live,
would you continue to wait?
To do the things
you really want to do.
Accomplish your dreams
be the real you!

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mdegenhardt on Oct 16, 2008
All very good questions that leave the reader thinking. Very well written. Michael
roberto sardelli on Oct 16, 2008
so many good questions, that one can think about. Very well written, and a excellent job done on this one. well done
Ruby Hawk on Oct 17, 2008
I think our lives are counted by the breaths we take. We don’t know how many breaths we will have so it’s best to take advantage of every one of them.
Jenysie on Oct 26, 2008
Thanks everyone!
Continue to live your lives to the absolute fullest, don’t take anything for granted. You never know what tomorrow holds.
~♥~
Jenysie
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Will Gray on Nov 6, 2008
Very beautiful and so full of wisdom!
Peter Cimino on Nov 26, 2008
Ncely done. This piece really makes you think. I like this.
S A JOHNSON on Nov 30, 2008
Very well said. ^_^
Ori Sonata on Feb 28, 2009
Every second in life is precious, we should appreciate them.
hfj on Mar 10, 2009
Good poem and well written. You have to always be yourself no matter what, always be yourself. Well done.

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