An Angelic intervention of the life that I had led up until this point…and looking back at what I have learnt from it….so far…

‘Life Review…’

‘Ah, won’t you sit down, just for a moment or two,
I think we should look at your mid Life review….
I sat down in the chair, wondering how I got here,
and who was this woman, hovering ever so near…
And why has she wings, and that strange funny glow?
There’s something not right, (I’m observant, you know!).

She produced this large file, and opened it slow….
‘Now my dear child…Let us see where we go…
At 13, a Dancer you wanted to play,
part of your dream in the Royal Ballet..
At 15, an artist, with brushes in pots…
and yet strangely enough, you followed it not.

At 17, a Singer’…….well she went on and on,
reviewing my life, and the rights and the wrongs.
The paths I had taken, the turnings I’d missed,
 till pausing a moment, she did ask me this;
‘Have you suffered regrets, as your 50th year,
creeps ever closer, creeps ever near?’

‘Regrets, no I haven’t', I softly replied,
‘cos even the rough times, I got through with pride.
Each difficult step, taught me lessons galore…
the pain and the love, and what yet is in store..
With an angelic smile, she faded, right there, on cue
her words ringing clear, Girl, you’ve Passed your review…..

Photo Credit; Michal Marco.

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  • richardpeeej on Feb 25, 2011

    Well done for passing your angel’s review of you life Songbird. You have many original ideas for your poems. Keep them coming and I will keep on enjoying reading them…

  • SongbirdB on Feb 25, 2011

    Thank you Richard, I always appreciate your support in my work, and it means a lot to me. I will keep writing, if you keep reading them…lol Thank you so much for visiting my page my friend. :~)

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 26, 2011

    Wow! Songbird. That is a stunning poem, so beautifully written, heart warming and humerous too. I really enjoyed this piece.

    Christine

  • SongbirdB on Feb 26, 2011

    Christine, you are always a joy to see on my page. This poem started out as one thing and decided to take it’s own course, as so often happens. We say that we write poetry, but I sometimes think we are only the mediums for the words to flow….

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